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by KotoneHime

schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy fic! I feel sorry for sasuke though.
person HannaFO
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gaara chan so doninering XD Very great chap.. thankies!!
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good i feel sorry for sai
person gaara89
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way Gaara and Sai are developing and getting closer. Please continue soon, though I guess I don't even have to ask because you update so fast already.
person nawatia
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! more please! Great job! Does Sai know that it is abuse when his father/Danzo hits him regarding the quality of his work - like he did earlier in your story?
person gaara89
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next one. And, srry to be a nag about the incest thing...I just don't like it. Honesly I like this story enough to just ignore it and skim down. So i hope to see an update soon!
person nawatia
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am enjoying the chapters on Sai and Gaara - they are just 2 characters that I find fascinating, as well as how 2 very damaged and socially challenged individuals can learn and grow into a somewhat healthy and loving relationship. Keep going! Is Naruto fluffy background, or will his character grow out of the fey uberuke? I wonder what the plot evolution will be for the Sasuke/Itachi story line?
person Momma Cat
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ehhh? There was no chapter 17, only a note... did it happen again?

You wrote incest for me? ;_; How thoughtful. Ne Ne! How 'bout I write a one shot pairing for you? It'll be short but I think I can pull it off. What pairing would you like? SasukexNaruto? GaaraxNeji NejixChoji? What, What???

Actually I really hope you don't want a Chouji story. x_x I don't think I could do one with him. Using JaraiyaxGai would be easier, oddly enough...

Hee hee! I love slutty Sasuke! What about a tag team of SasukexKonoha ninjas? Hee hee hee hee...
person HannaFO
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...... *blows kisses at gaara and sai*...... To cute!!!!!!
person HannaFO
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
owe him? what? great chapter :D very smex begining XD

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