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First of all, excellent chapter! Love the medical description you’ve put in here, although I was just a tad bit confused when you were saying Sasuke was going to implant his eggs turned from his sperm as well as use Hinata’s eggs (because I guess I thought Sasuke was going to just medically inject both his sperm and Naruto’s sperm in each of Hinata’s eggs). And if Sasuke wanted kids with Naruto but knew he needed a sergeant mother, I would have assumed Sasuke would only used Sasuke’s eggs with Naruto’s sperm and just implant them into Hinata for her to carry. Oh, well. I’m sure I’ll get the jest of it through the next few chapters as the eggs begin to grow within Hinata. I have to say, I like the whole idea of Hinata being the sergeant mother of Sasuke and Naruto’s children. I’ve always thought Hinata would be a really good mother and its cute how Sasuke’s affection for Hinata is similar to that of what affections he once had for his mother. I can’t wait to see Naruto’s shocked face when he finds out he’s the biological parent of Sasuke and Hinata’s children which happen to be Naruto’s children as well. I wonder how many they’ll have… Well, I’ll just have to find out later in the chapters, ne?

~SasuNaru723~

Wonderful chapter, loved the beginning of this lemon. Hmm Sasuke's impatience is going to come back to bite him in the ass isn't it? I can see the similarities between this one and your other story. I can see where you drew it from. Nicely done. You poor dear! What happened to you? I hope you are off the crutches soon and the surgery took care of whatever was ailing you. Ah med's . . . well yes I have lots of experience of trying to write and taking med's that do strange things to you. I'll say you do a hell of a lot better job than I do! I usually just pass out on the keyboard and have lots of strange letters and symbols left behind.

I don't know why but I love it when Sasuke is obsessed.

I don't know why but I love it when Sasuke is obsessed.

loved this chapter!! can't wait to read the next one!!!!

Your story just gets better with every chapter. I absolutely love this story, and I look forward to Tuesdays and Saturdays because of updates! It's one of my favorite stories(top 3). Can't wait for the next chapter!^_^

Sasuke and hinata are sooooo bad! but its genius! I cant wait for the next chapter! ^^

Thanks for the e-mail! sorry it takes me soo long to review! you actually update more fast than what I can read lol. I really like that about you! anyway I agree with Sasuke, eww sakura and naruto in bed! Hinata is really sweet. you are making it so dificult. cuz' am kind of starting for hinata to end with sasuke or naruto. It just that she desever it, she has been good to them! I can't wait to know if naruto did it with sakura. I'm kind of hoping that naruto was so nervous that he couldn't get up and they end up doing nothing! lol looking forward to the next chap. great chapter!!

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I'm really really looking forward to seeing how the children's appearences turn out. I think people would be suspicious if hinata gave birth to blonde haired babies. And yay to m/m smut that will be seen in the next chapter.

Yay! Sasuke's not going to waste time in making babies with Naruto!! I love mini Naruto's and Sasuke's! :D Thanks for the new chapter!