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for Of Cookies and Men

by SumiHatake

person Anise
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well of course it makes perfect sense, you just need to be fluent in Kakashi speak ^_^
This is why I adore Genma you almost don't believe that he's as clueless as he let's on and poor Naruto all he wanted was a cookie, this had me giggling throughout the whole thing! :)
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm still cracking up, especially the exchange about the symbol with Naruto. Kakashi anticipating the cookie...so funny. Well, you can't blame them, fresh hot home-made chunin is a rare treat! Can't wait to see if he brings in another batch!
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Okay...it wasn't the cookie they were arguing about. This was a clever way to watch the Jonins try to 'mark territory.'
person Akaatje
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!

I know exactely what you mean! ;) (at least I think)

Can yoiu please update, make another chapter (A)

I liked it !!! ^^
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was quite cute with all the symbolism and misunderstanding! it was also adorable that naruto was confused with symbol/cymbal. =) thank you for sharing and i hope that there's another update very soon!

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