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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That lesson was very simple and to the point. Sasori is a scary bastard.
Nice work.
Nice work.
schedule
March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Usually fics with Deidara iritate me because most authors overuse the 'un' to the point of it being physically painful, but this was surprisingly enjoyable. :3
I loved Sasori's characterization, and the banter was a nice touch.
Good work, hope to see more from you!
I loved Sasori's characterization, and the banter was a nice touch.
Good work, hope to see more from you!
schedule
March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fan fic was impressive. Their interaction was believable and sexy, and the story itself was written well.