rate_review Reviews

This one seemed fairly IC, if a little too nice on Itachi's part. But the sex was hot, and Sasuke's innocence was endearing.

this is so hot~ I don't care if sasuke was a minor, itasasu is the best!!!
so there's a second part of the story? please put it up soon! can't wait!

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Can I tell you how much I (for sick demented reasons yet unexplained) enjoy reading abuse fics. I don't find them remotely sexy in the least. In fact I'm somewhat horrified reading them. I read this with a bit of horror. Covering my mouth and pleading for Itachi not to do what I knew he was going to do.. myself having no way to stop it. Gah. Ick. Yuck. Bleh. *shutter*

That said, this story was very excellently done. Totally and completely believable in the ways one would go about molesting their younger brother. Its sickening, and I commend you for it. The ending, I thought, fell a bit short. I felt like it needed just another sentence or two for it to feel complete. Not that it takes away from the story, per-say, but it just felt like a cut off. I dunno. Anyway. Great job on the story. Keep up the good work.

Great story! Looking foward to the next version of it