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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This thing is so freakin' hot!
There's just ONE problem with it.
How could you just cut off like that?!!!!! Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!! I is begging you! XO
There's just ONE problem with it.
How could you just cut off like that?!!!!! Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!! I is begging you! XO
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So hot, I hope you'll update soon ! It really is interesting ^^
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if any of the characters actually stay in character... but I laughed... a lot! Very funny story, thanks!
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want lemon! Love it by the way.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mean mean mean... to leave us hanging... mean I say and um I see hotness in the future?? Soon??? Please??
Slave
Slave
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ibiki is about to have his wish cum true!!!! *massive nose bleed from mental image* OMG *tries to stem the flow of blood with tissues* ok it's a kink of mine to see such action!!!
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!