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for Beautiful Tragedy

by Mayana

schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boo!! Short chapter! Boo to the shortness, but I liked it still XD

Hahah, Sasuke bastard gave up his coat...how sweet *chuckles* So far the characters are still a bit OOC but you'll probably work through that later, well I hope so anyways XD

I do like the fact that Naruto isn't a cry baby :D

Good chapter, still look forward to more!
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here's a review!!! No stopping without a good ending/cliffy!
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Naruto didn't kill Sasuke. And Sasuke is actually helping Naruto. Amazing! Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs for a long time* That was wicked. I loved it XD At first I was all...wow a lot of freaking gore...and it keeps going ^___^ it was freaking sweet!

I look forward to an update! I can't wait to see how Naruto reacts when he meets Sasuke!

Great first fanfic!!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start!!.. now I can't wait to find out what happens next... just as a note, you called Naruto Lucy once and refered to him as a her once...^^
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg! elfen lied! i liked that series a lot. very twisted that one was. looking foward to the next update.

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