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by Lyndsay

schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i always love quick updates! :D though the chpter could have been a little longer. you got straight into the plot with this chappie! yay! i hope naruto thinks of *cough* interesting *cough* ways for sasuke to pay him back. *ggigle*
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooOOOOOooooOOOOO STUDY DATE~~~!! <3

Naruto may be dumb, but he's smarter than he looks. >:) hehehe
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Naruto is only pretending to be that dumb. I know he's slow but damn...
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. It seems interesting so far and despite what Naruto says he still seems pretty dumb to me. Anyhow, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you've got me interested. :) ill look out for your update.
person MewMew2
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start putting Naruto as one of the football players. Ithink this could develop into a good fic over time.
person Dragon7
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
person bautifullove348
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm this story seems very promising. I like your writing style it's new and refreshing. Please continue!

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