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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just gotten an account, so I haven't been able to review before...
Love the story!
Neji does seem to be acting too 'girly,' but it works.
Shika/Neji was the first yaoi couple I ever wrote a fanfiction too, so I have a weakness for them. XD
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaahh, so cute! I loooove these two and I admire you for your ability to do this tight-rope-walking with Neji - proud Hyuuga/ brilliant shinobi/ shy lover. The mix is oh so entertaining ^_^ And the way Shika teases him to no end...*snigger* Oh, I so can't wait for the next steps our dear Shika is going to lead Neji through.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I new I wouldn't get it right, but it was fun guessing...and thanks for the cookie, it was yummy.

It seems to be starting to heat up a little in the story. I can't wait to see what else happens.
person pen_name
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*munching on the two cookies she just got* Whoahaha! What could Shikamaru possibly have said to Sasuke? And Neji have never been frenched? XDDDDD Now THAT surprised me. So good of Shika to, as you said, break him in slowly ^_^ Agh, can't wait til the smut!!! XD
person digiditz
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"One down" A reference to first base? I couldn't think of anything else.

Oh and keep up the excellent work!
person Lonelydove
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is so cute, *sniff* Shika/neji pairs are one of my favs
lol
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say about this chapter is Awwwwwww. Those moments before the party were sweet. Lee had me cracking up...manly tears, I'm gonna start calling them that from now on. lol And lets see, the "theme" for the next couple of chapters is "Getting to know each other better" *wink wink* If you know what I mean. XD rofl
person luxeflex
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's all so happy and cute and and yay ^^ A great break from all the angsty fics !
you probably turned shika/neji into my new favorite pairing
person Bree
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took me some time to get around to reading this, but I'm glad I did. I love the story so far. And as much as I'm anticipating some action between Neji and Shikamaru, I like the way their relationship has progressed so far; it's more believable, and really enhances the story compared to when authors jump into the romance too quickly, and don't get to include the cute little moments that I really liked in your story. Keep it coming, I can't wait to read more (:
person Lavinia
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woot! new chap! yay! I really can't come up with anything to say :D my brain seems to have deleted all the comments I thought of as I was reading... well, too bad, the chap was good. I'll give you better review next time...

P.S. 'ehkä paras ikinä' means 'maybe the best ever'. Sorry, didn' mean to mix languages...

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