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OMG YOU WERE GOING TO LET HIM DIE :( meanie

but again i am crying. :) but happy tears. :) thank you for being a fast updater.

Omg I love this story with a passion. I've been reading it for awhile and I should've reviewed before but better late than never, eh? Ok so I think I liked this chapter the best, along with when they got married (that was so sweet), and I have to admit, I did cry too. I was hoping you'd do something like this I and I was pretty shocked when you did. But yeah its a great story and another thing, thanks for using proper grammer lol. I hate reading fics with words mispelled one after another lol, I can't complain too much though cuz I'm the one reading not writing lol. But anyways keep up the great work.

nooo you made me cry too! ;_; soooo sad

*sniff* i cried too ^^

Sorry!!! I just realized that I didn't review the last chapter although it was surely wrecking my nerves to no end! I almost had a heart attack when Neji got stabbed with the sword! Now you are to blame if I die five years earlier! This part was so, so sad T_T Hang in there Shika, we are all with you! Come on Neji, you have to make it!! There are people who want to tell you something important!!! Argh, suspense..again *grmbl*

OMG! My eyes watered up when Shika started crying...and that is saying something for me. I am NOT an emotional person, I NEVER cry unless I'm really really ticked off. Any writer that can get that from me diserves a standing ovation. lol *applause*

When someone is in serious danger of dying in a hospital, it's a 'Code Blue' not a 'Code Red.'
It just just a couple of months ago, when I was still nineteen (like Shikamaru) when a Code Blue was called for my own mother.

"D-Do you think we should call a code blue?"
"Um...yeah. Code blue."

So sad!! Argh! Poor Neji! *sniff*
Don't let him die!
Enjoy the rest of your Spring Break!
update

you have an awesome story

write more now! D<

Oh my gosh! I cried along with Shikamaru too. When he broke down in the bathroom, so did I. I was shaking and sobbing. But I managed to get a hold on myself. I loved Yoshino's speech thing. About how you have to believe. The depth of it made me want to cry again, but then I wouldn't be able to read the rest of the story. Ahh! I'm such an angst addict. But I hope things will get better. There's only so much angst I can take until I really get depressed. I can't wait 'till your next update. Keep up the good work!