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by NekoMalik

person Jewlz
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooop I think I'm first to Review. I saw that you didn't have any reviews and I just thought, "No, No, No". Your a really good writter. And i'm not just saying that. Kiba's dream was hottt *wipes drool from her mouth* and i don't even like the pairing of Kiba and Shino but you make me love it. The only thing i would suggest is maybe you want to put the dreams in italics, but it's just a suggestion. Anyway beautiful discriptions, beautiful job. Update soon!!!!
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait... is this story going to have M/M and M/F??? Cause if you throw a Naru/Hina in there, well damn, this story will be quite the hot little read indeed. >:) hehehe.

Keep up the good work.

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