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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable ^^
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It could have been a bit better written, but it gave off a very sexy feeling.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Are you going to add more? I think you have good potential with this story.
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story. Plan on doing any more of this series?
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot hot hot, that was a very good threesome. it is very hard to find a good threesome/moresome fic. i would love to see a naruxsakuxhinaxino fic. that would be sweet. but please keep writing. this was a great start for a naruto fic. congadulations
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... it was like as the story progressed and the action got hotter, the grammar and punctuation just degraded more and more... writing too much hot stuff making it difficult to type? >:)
hehehe. =^^= Over all, aside from some slight grammar issues at the end, this was well done. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
hehehe. =^^= Over all, aside from some slight grammar issues at the end, this was well done. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.