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for The Demilitarized Zone

by lexjamandme

person Harryetty
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, psyco-Itachi, I loved it. Total Win!!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two words for you, Bloody brilliant!!!
^_^
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It ended so perfectly. Great Job.
=)
person Seekah
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so INCREDIBLE! I have never laughed so hard in my life and it had everything--from the light hearted humor back in camp to the accident and finally the romance/sex (mmm!) I enjoyed it so much and the flashbacks were amazing, how you had everything tie in and follow up. Your narration is mind blowing and I have to say my favorite part of this fic was the unique messages Itachi sent back and forth with Naruto and Sasuke. Hahahahahhahaa god! But I thought he was going to hook up with someone not having a sad, wifeless past....ah well. Enjoyed every second of this fic and I'm glad Sasuke and Naruto stayed engaged and Naruto's parents lived. Gai is truly a master at his craft.
person becca
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't usually review stories, but i just had to tell you this one was amazing, you're a really good writer. keep it up please. oh and your rant at the end about the manga....THAAANK-YOU!
person vikuta
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! yes i want to say, something else and a lot more. but i don't know, how to choose words. this story, whole, is so .... wow, that i even am araid that my compliments would't be enough or good, i'm afraid that i can spoil it. so i just want to let you know, that i'm very thankfull, 'cause this fic made me feel a very big amount of emotions. ant that i smiled, cryed, and loved in this story.
person darkmousy
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is truly one of the best fanfics ever in this fandom. i loved every bit of it. and how well written it was. i love when writers take fanfics this seriously. and the e-mails as well, always so amusing. and i will definitely keep an eye out for future one shot type continuations of this. much much love to you!! =D
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-busts out laughing- omg i love itachi!!! -laughs til she fell out the chair-
person vikuta
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm reading the first chapter and i can't do that 'cause that is so funny. and i wanna siply say that to you "cause i'm afraid that i can forget this amazing feeling. you are simply. wow!
person lo
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun story. Nicely written and funny. Nice work.

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