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by lexjamandme

person narutoandsasuke
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!! your already on another story!!!!!!!!!hizazah!!!!!!! i love ur stories for the love of his son was absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! the way u protraeyed them was awesome!!!!! I ALSO LOVE THE DIFFERENCE IN THIS STORY FROM THE LAST ONE!!!!!!! NO MORE LOVEY DOVEY STUFF THE REALLY HARDCORE SMUTT!!!! (squeel) !!!!! ^.^ keep up the good work and update fast!!!!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I was LMAO. I'll be watching for the next chapter.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so so happy that you are continuing this story. It's so happy. I love it. Can't wait for more!
=)
person Imagy
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SUNSHINE~!
hilarious babe!
can't wait to see what happens next ^o^
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just recently joined AFF and read all of your "For the Love of His Son" and really enjoyed. I've now fallen in love with story. It's clever and hilarious. I really can't wait to read your next chapter. I'm trying to start Beta-ing, so if you need one, I'd be happy to oblige, especially for a story as awesome as this one. Waiting as patiently as I can for your next chapter!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you for this, truly love you. The e-mail interludes are so well done. I love how you put the twist on Gai, making Naruto use the term 'Green Beast' as a scary nickname rather than what Gai calls himself (if I'm interpreting this correctly XD)
person qwerty
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, of course Naruto would know Gai from beforehand.... his life sucks!
update!
person darkmousy
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved, loved, loved the ending of the 2nd chapter! XD and am looking forward to the next update.
person hln12
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love sadistic Itachi.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD you're gonna kill me with this one, it's hilarious! I had to wait for 30 minutes after finishing it to be able to write a coherent review and even now I'm still giggling a bit. I didn't miss the way Naruto has rain issues and I'm looking forward to Sasuke worming the story out of Naruto. The e-mails to Itachi, especially Naruto's, had me dying of laughter. I absolutely can not wait for your update, well I can but under protest. As a side note, how's the dragon egg doing? Hatched yet?

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