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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That so awesome! I love the ending, the passed out secretriy (My Spelling no good :p). Anyway I love the whole court thing it was so well thought out. I'm so interested in this. What's going to happen next? Why is the guard following Naruto? I need to read more! Please update soon.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
read this ages ago but i was too busy laughing at the end to reply and i KNEW that it wdnt be updated for at least a week grrrr so i had time to come back an review :)
Obviously the sasuke naruto interaction is my fav parts in this but i have to say the whole trial thing was intense! poor poor kakashi having to go through that at 20 and having them pry into his personal life and all, trying to get through school. damn orochimaru bastard! and what happened in the 'time skip' in naruto's file... sigh more bad things *cries* and it was so happy when we started. angst! where are u coming from?! *tries to beat it away* lol
So of course i was cracking up at the end as i already mentioned, i wanna see how sas gets out of this one, what will naruto say when he finds out, oh and is the guard following naruto with malicious intent?! O_o Lets find out!
Obviously the sasuke naruto interaction is my fav parts in this but i have to say the whole trial thing was intense! poor poor kakashi having to go through that at 20 and having them pry into his personal life and all, trying to get through school. damn orochimaru bastard! and what happened in the 'time skip' in naruto's file... sigh more bad things *cries* and it was so happy when we started. angst! where are u coming from?! *tries to beat it away* lol
So of course i was cracking up at the end as i already mentioned, i wanna see how sas gets out of this one, what will naruto say when he finds out, oh and is the guard following naruto with malicious intent?! O_o Lets find out!
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! this story is so good!!! what happened in the break of narutos life, and minato's heir? Heir to what? can't wait to see narutos reaction when he finds out him and sasuke are engaged, thats going to be surprising. either way i love the hint of neji gaara, i am a huge fan but their is so little fanfiction out there for them.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Great story, great story! Naruto and Sasuke are pretty decently characterized. Normally I DESPISE KakaIru(you know, because that passionate 2 minutes conversation they had back 3 years ago way really something), but you kind of made me like it :) Plot is fabulous. Do you happen to be reading "Blackmail and Betrayal"? Another NaruSasu. Your story just reminded me of it because Sasuke had a murder attempt on him in there by a nurse slipping into his hospital room. One negative for the story: I was really hoping that their first kiss/makeoutness would have been more, hm, angry kissing? I don't know. Continue, por favor!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my where to start? The last line from Itachi? Wonderful I snickered for a full minute. The little flashbacks are much like chocolate chips in mint ice cream, a delicious little extra that blends so well with an already wonderful treat. I have to say that my curiosity about what's happening and what has happened in Naruto's past is rising to insane heights. Does the blank spot in Naruto's file have something to do with his issues with rain? And I'm positively on the edge of my seat with the ups and downs in the relationship building between Sasuke and Naruto.
I have to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I actually haven't been on AFF very much lately and I never got an update alert from fanfiction.net about the most recent chapters so I thought you hadn't updated yet.
Anyway, wonderful update and thanks for the dragon loan. For Itachi intimidation purposes one dragon is effective, two growling at him shuts him up pronto. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing (when I see an update that is )
I have to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I actually haven't been on AFF very much lately and I never got an update alert from fanfiction.net about the most recent chapters so I thought you hadn't updated yet.
Anyway, wonderful update and thanks for the dragon loan. For Itachi intimidation purposes one dragon is effective, two growling at him shuts him up pronto. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing (when I see an update that is )
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome 8th chapter!! i love you!!! cant wait for the next one
Sincerly
~You Secret Admirer
Sincerly
~You Secret Admirer
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O you would have to end on that note, wouldn't you?
buuuuuuut
I loved it ^o^
and I so can't wait for more
this is seriously one kick-ass fanfiction, though
it's, like, totally amazing in every since of the word
so please
update soon~!
:D
buuuuuuut
I loved it ^o^
and I so can't wait for more
this is seriously one kick-ass fanfiction, though
it's, like, totally amazing in every since of the word
so please
update soon~!
:D
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left me on a cliff hanger. I can't wait till the next story.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another evil cliffhanger. I am so proud. I will be obsessively checking several times a day everyday until you update.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* the Duckies aren't too happy. Excellent update!