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by lexjamandme

person Jelp
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My first reaction is...omg...Itachi reproduced...and the second thought is HAHAHA! All your Uchihas love Naruto! :-)

Hmm, this is really sad. It's so sad that Naruto didn't get to know his biological parents. Iruka and Kakashi are his parents, no doubt about it, but it's still sad. I feel bad for Naruto to have to struggle with thinking between those who he didn't know, and those who he knows who have loved him.

I really hope Mikoto breaks out some Sasuke and Naruto baby pictures. That'd be great! Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
person Charlie
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well there goes the idea that there was any relationship other than friendship between Fugaku and Minato. I still think it's great thought.
Thank you for giving us such a long update. Love how possessive Sasuke is.
person gaara89
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Did Sasuke just really propose to Naruto? I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay yay yay chapter 10 is here!! This however is chapter 9s review. why? bc i'm lazy and didnt review before but i think you're so awesome you should get reviews for EVERY chapter! :)

I may have said this before but bah! THIS is my all time fav chapter so far! fabulous fabulous utter fabulociousness. When sas' dad walked in i nearly pissed myself with laughter not to mention sasuke's responses in his mind to each person's comment 'et tu brutus?' LOL you slay me.

Then there was just sooo much naruto sasuke interaction in this one! yaaayyy!!! naru not wanting to go home and be alone, then knowing sasuke would take his mind off everything *fangirl squuueee time* lmao Oh, and of course we got to see the first impression thing from naruto's point of view :D wondering how everyone wasnt stopped in their tracks staring at demigod sasuke Gah! i adored this chapter, in fact i'ma go read it over now b4 chapter 10. review ya later meng.

p.s. that asprin thing hahahahahaha, worse when naruto took it anyway... good times good times
person charmpit
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ho-lee shit! Someone has lost his freaking mind, trying to take out Sasuke! I love the phone call Itachi made--hey hey, he's calling in the f-ing cavalry to protect his own, I freaking LOVE it! So is Sasuke going to give it to Naruto now, or what?! He could sure use something to relax him, after all...
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are evil! You hear me, EVIL! You have to update, and I mean soon. *glare* ..... Great chater! ^__^
person Vox
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*holds up a banner saying "WE LOVE DEVIL-TACHI!"*
1) I love you. If I've never said that before, I'm so sorry.
2) *worships your Itachi and begs for more, 'cause he's so adorable when he's being all possessive*
3) You will give us the name of Itachi's spouse soon, won't you? *glare, glare, glare*
4) Since I've been holding it in for a while... *squeal!*

Damn it, my Uchiha is slipping... ^^

Love!
person coma288
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story.
person despairs
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naoki is adorable! Sasuke better watch out, he's got some competition for Naruto's affection *giggles*
The SasuNaru action in Sasuke's room was hot. I like how he can make Naruto's brain shut down so easily lol.
Oh my, now Itachi is super pissed...nobody attacks his little brother and favorite minion. Great chapter (as always)
Now I'm extra eager to read the next one...especially after Sasuke said, “Welcome to the fold, Naruto.” Woo! Go Sasuke, get your blonde!
Mmm possessive Uchiha's are absolutely sexy.
person animelover
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whew! i don't know how you do it, but once again youve blended humor and suspense in a nice neat package! one minute, you have a cute lil Chee Ha stealing Naru away, then we have an announcement that someone just tried to kill sasu and kakairu AGAIN!!!

absolutely brilliant work! and i love the flashbacks; i'm curious to see why the friends split up after the custody battle.

anxiously awaiting your next update ... oh, no pressure or anything, just weave your magic like you always do!

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