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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HI,
I found this story today and I read it through.
I loved my ass off at how you depict the Uchihas. Just great. How you descibe their dark and emotionless behaviour and still make them good people. (Even Itachi!!!! It's the first time ever that I don't want to see Itachi dead. I usually hate this character with a passion, as is probably intended from the mangaka) And turn it into a very nice running gag. It's great and not overdone. And the rest of the characters: very well done! And I liked how you fit everyone in the story.
I want to thank you soo much for sharing this story because I needed something to make me smile today. I needed to read a story that smells of happy end and makes me laugh and is still very interesting and not a run-of-the-mill story.
So: thank you!
And may I please be a greedy little fan and ask for more soon?!?
I found this story today and I read it through.
I loved my ass off at how you depict the Uchihas. Just great. How you descibe their dark and emotionless behaviour and still make them good people. (Even Itachi!!!! It's the first time ever that I don't want to see Itachi dead. I usually hate this character with a passion, as is probably intended from the mangaka) And turn it into a very nice running gag. It's great and not overdone. And the rest of the characters: very well done! And I liked how you fit everyone in the story.
I want to thank you soo much for sharing this story because I needed something to make me smile today. I needed to read a story that smells of happy end and makes me laugh and is still very interesting and not a run-of-the-mill story.
So: thank you!
And may I please be a greedy little fan and ask for more soon?!?
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what to expect-
But, this entire story has been a pleasant surprise, and wonderful read-
But, this entire story has been a pleasant surprise, and wonderful read-
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, oh man, oh man.
This story... so far, has made me so fuckin' happy.
And I don't know why.
I'm not even a Naru-fan.
Bu it has all the right humor, and all the right turns, and goddamn, Naruto plays the cello.
How the hell did you even come up with that?
If I had known this story was here, I would have gotten the internet back months ago.
Where did you get the title, anyways?
Because, if I'm right, it seems like something outta Calvin and Hobbs. ...like their both in bed and Calvin has cold feet or something. Iunno.
Anyways, this fic... is a masterpiece. And one of the only ones that I'll ever stick around for.
God, I hope it keeps going.
Thank you, for being so awesome.
This story... so far, has made me so fuckin' happy.
And I don't know why.
I'm not even a Naru-fan.
Bu it has all the right humor, and all the right turns, and goddamn, Naruto plays the cello.
How the hell did you even come up with that?
If I had known this story was here, I would have gotten the internet back months ago.
Where did you get the title, anyways?
Because, if I'm right, it seems like something outta Calvin and Hobbs. ...like their both in bed and Calvin has cold feet or something. Iunno.
Anyways, this fic... is a masterpiece. And one of the only ones that I'll ever stick around for.
God, I hope it keeps going.
Thank you, for being so awesome.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! Amazing, exciting, interesting, delicious and so well put together. I can't get enough.
I must profess my adoration to all of your stories, they are all so amazing in each their own ways but this one...this one makes my heart pound. It is so eloquent, so well written. It makes for a much better read when you give the flashbacks of their pasts incorporated into the present scene. And the way you portray Naruto and Sasuke and their relationship developing is just perfect, PERFECT!
This is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read on AFF.net. I love it, absolutely love it. Please, please update soon!
I must profess my adoration to all of your stories, they are all so amazing in each their own ways but this one...this one makes my heart pound. It is so eloquent, so well written. It makes for a much better read when you give the flashbacks of their pasts incorporated into the present scene. And the way you portray Naruto and Sasuke and their relationship developing is just perfect, PERFECT!
This is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read on AFF.net. I love it, absolutely love it. Please, please update soon!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot chapter. Can't wait for more.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now we know why you have a pack of draons evil cliff hanging lady. i read all your other one shots and i really liked them especially the transformers one you made me go and watch the movie. i can't say anything else except please update soon.
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I can see someone pulling back the curtains. Holy hell, is that your mother? She’s hot.”
I laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and couldn't stop for a very, very long time.
Just wanted to say how brilliant this story is. I've been following it for some time now and can't recall if I've reviewed it previously - If not - You deserve all the reviews in the world. This is just the right mix of humour and angst in a story - there's bad things happening but you don't let the events drag everything down. It's just so wonderful! Please keep updating!
I laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and couldn't stop for a very, very long time.
Just wanted to say how brilliant this story is. I've been following it for some time now and can't recall if I've reviewed it previously - If not - You deserve all the reviews in the world. This is just the right mix of humour and angst in a story - there's bad things happening but you don't let the events drag everything down. It's just so wonderful! Please keep updating!
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
little bit of mixed feelings about this one... is that why i'm reviewing so quickly??? tons of good stuff tho Tons :) naruto saying what will sasuke's mother think about him being an abusive fiance, then the 'girly' comment with poor 'distracted by sasukes hotness' naruto agreeing hahahahaha ROLLING
Of course the babbling naruto outside the hospital was too adorable. 'will they like me?' aawww of course naru chan! *glomps*
Sasuke's mom is hot... lol nuff said.
Now my biggest shock ITACHI HAS CHILDREN??? whoa. whoa man. one an absolutely adorable chibi crazy over naruto rofl cute.
The mixed feeling came in with: WHY does the fam still not know ab the engagement being false?? its just sitting there eating at me because they kept getting interrupted.. i just feel like its ALREADY snow balled enough, it needs to end theeennn 'welcome to the fold naruto' WTF??? wat the hell does that mean sasuke?! he wants to keep the engagement going? he's trying to say naruto is like family now?? what? And lastly, as much as i want lemon lol i thought sas didnt want their first to be when he was 'distracting' naruto. hmmm mixed indeed LOL
OK finished rambling! damn this was long. i love love love this story as ALWAYS. eagerly awaiting next esp now that big baddy 'tachi has put out his own hit.. poor unsuspecting fool this stalker is :D
Of course the babbling naruto outside the hospital was too adorable. 'will they like me?' aawww of course naru chan! *glomps*
Sasuke's mom is hot... lol nuff said.
Now my biggest shock ITACHI HAS CHILDREN??? whoa. whoa man. one an absolutely adorable chibi crazy over naruto rofl cute.
The mixed feeling came in with: WHY does the fam still not know ab the engagement being false?? its just sitting there eating at me because they kept getting interrupted.. i just feel like its ALREADY snow balled enough, it needs to end theeennn 'welcome to the fold naruto' WTF??? wat the hell does that mean sasuke?! he wants to keep the engagement going? he's trying to say naruto is like family now?? what? And lastly, as much as i want lemon lol i thought sas didnt want their first to be when he was 'distracting' naruto. hmmm mixed indeed LOL
OK finished rambling! damn this was long. i love love love this story as ALWAYS. eagerly awaiting next esp now that big baddy 'tachi has put out his own hit.. poor unsuspecting fool this stalker is :D
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeesh. i'm dying of curiousity here. i can't wait for the next chapter. please don't torture me ^_^
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* and now the devil himself is entering the playing field. Oh my gods, this plot gets heavier and heavier. Is Naruto going to be able to handle living at the Uchihas like that? lol..the little boy is too adorable!!!!