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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was messed up, man.
I officially loathe Sasuke with a passion now.
I officially loathe Sasuke with a passion now.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was SO fucked up. i serious would love to have the ability to strangle that stupid asshole. nice first chap though. never read something with a plot like this, definitely looking foward to the next update. *shakes head* i have this feeling that things are gonna get worst for poor naru before they get better.....
~Devious
~Devious
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG..I can't believe they would do that to him! Poor Naruto!
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And here we come to the reason that this is not a very happy story. Not for me.
YOU DESERVE TO BE ROYALLY PIMP AND BITCH SLAPPED! Ummm, 3-4 chapters?? I don't really think the mind usually does what you plan to do if you get plot bunny attacked. Which I hope you do because I love your writing style!!!!
-Damp *It would be very nice it it were a least two digit number of chapters. XDDDD I mean that in the nicest way possible!!!!*
YOU DESERVE TO BE ROYALLY PIMP AND BITCH SLAPPED! Ummm, 3-4 chapters?? I don't really think the mind usually does what you plan to do if you get plot bunny attacked. Which I hope you do because I love your writing style!!!!
-Damp *It would be very nice it it were a least two digit number of chapters. XDDDD I mean that in the nicest way possible!!!!*
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhhhhhhaha! That was so sad! whaaaaaaaaa! Bad Sasuke, Bad!
Please make Naruto feel better. Please, please, please! *puppy dog eyes*
That was an awesome and heart wrenching chapter. Can't wait for more.
Poor Naruto!
=)
Please make Naruto feel better. Please, please, please! *puppy dog eyes*
That was an awesome and heart wrenching chapter. Can't wait for more.
Poor Naruto!
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds good can't wait to read more
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is is an awesome piece. Truly heart wrenching. Anyway, I can't wait for chapter two. Ja.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah no... I'm already feeling sad and upset and you haven't even finished. Silly stupid Sasuke. (On a side note, illiteration is fun.) Poor Naruto and Sasuke... could he possibly have been any more of an idiot? I know, I said it before but dang. I'm looking forward to more. (Sits with hands over my face peeking through fingers in fearful anticipation)
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa, what a story! sasu just screwed up and cost naru his dream, with a little help from sakura of course. man alive, PLEASE continue this story. i really want to see how sasu gets out of this ...