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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee, hee you were right I don't want to miss the smut. Well done! Hmm is it just me or is there two different points of view on this going on? I mean Iruka is a little hesitant about it at first until the lust takes over but it seemed Iruka was worried about it being a 'one night stand with a friend' while Kakashi was really possessive acting. The way you presented Kakashi it was like he seen this as a lot more than just a one night stand between friends. At one point he even was thinking of Iruka being his . . . 'Mine' . . . that is what he was thinking when they were moving towards having sex. Is this intended on your part? Is this going to be a problem in the future; like the next morning? If so lol this is going to be interesting as heck. Or am I reading too much into this?
littleolmee
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You certainly don't waste any time do you, I love horny dirty talking Iruka! This was a very steamy chapter and as always I look forward to more :)
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this! BTW, there ARE Iruka-screwed-up stories out there, but they're few and far between. It's great that that's what you're doing!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see you writing this pairing again, I saw you had a story about Gai and I just couldn't bring myself to read it, anything that might have to do with him and possibly sex just makes my brain hurt. But Iruka and Kakashi I don't hesitate at all and I loved how after dancing together just once they're already starting to feel possessive of each other. Such a fabulous first chapter they would be gorgeous out on a dance floor together, I look forward to seeing what your going to do after this start! ^_^
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Hey you. HEY! Don't toss that naked plot bunny out there and then just dangle a bit of the story as bait...we need more. More I tell you!I want to know how Iruka screws it up! You're right, this is not the usual pattern! Your readers will go mad with curiosity, especially with such a nicely-crafted scene to kick off the action. Please update soon, this is great! I'll just be sitting here twitching and chugging energy drinks in the meanwhile...grrrr.