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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I love how long they are! Can't wait till next time.... :P
person Sam
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep it up.
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still so freaking amazing and entertaining! I jump for joy every time I see this updated. Your setting huge standards for future Kakashi/Sakura fics for sure, simply awesome! I love the lap dance part thought she was going to get caught a few times lol. Too bad the guy was a dud and Tsu-whatever is shady I wonder what's up with that Hoe lol well update as soon as you can you have me quite addicted!

Loves Arry
person eyesofcambria
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I always get so happy when you update!!! This chapter was SUPER long, but i read it so quickly... it was over to fast!!!! Although i really loved the lapdance scene, it shows that they are still on a mission. But im really eager for a little Kakashi/Sakura fluff along with acting upon his secret desires from Sakura. You write with amazing detail, and i love that. You are a terrific writer, i never have to reread a sentence. I can just read through the whole chapter without any grammatical interuptions and be crazily interested at the same time!

Cant wait for some kakasaku action!

Update soon! i can't take the waitttt!
person Flamegirl9900
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Kakashi and Sakura would makes a cute couple. I wonder who is kidnapping theose girls I think it is the gitl who is the star dancer. can't wait for the next chapter.
person supersaiyanjoy
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter!! You write details so well!! I feel like I was there! What a disappoint that he wasn't the guy. Now Kakashi needs to get a lapdance from Sakura so he can get the "information". I only saw a few errors. I saw one that was 'what' when I think you meant 'that'. Nothing major. Just things that spell checker doesn't get. Great Job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person puppydog
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Another chapie!!! I`m loving it!!! That lap dance was sooo HOT! Please keep going,I need more!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOW...First lap dance went like THAT!!Whoa!Sakura IS a fast learner but DAMN she's doing it like a pro!And Kakashi is getting jealous!!But other than that I love your story its GOOD!Hope you post more soon!
Love Always^
^DeiDei
person angel
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated again and it was so worth it!

Sam did well on her first lapdance..and seeing Kakashi get jealous is always a plus. lol Have to wonder if Sakura will be giving him one in the future and those booths..what makes me think there will be a situation where Kakashi/Sakura have to use it.

anyay, I hope you enjoy your spring break and will be looking forward to the next chapter. :)
person Michael22
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and am looking forward to reading more. The plot is well thought out but most important is the detail that you go into . Detail is what makes good writing and your great at it so keep up the good work.

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