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for Stripped Bare

by emeraldfire84

person Nimis
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story. keep up the good work. seeing updates more often would be nice though. was worried for a bit that you had quit. but the nice long chapters are well worth the wait.
person Letum
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read a new chapter, it astounds me that there are people who still have the ability to write eloquently and without error. I absolutely love your story, and I'm very happy that you updated. :) I'd check back a couple times during the week to see if you had, and every time I didn't see it, a single little tear ran down my cheek. :P Hahaha, but anyways, I really hope you update again sometime soon. Please keep up the amazing work!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing so much. Keep it up!
person tylendel
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yet another awesome chapter. this is making crazy! i wanna just box kakashi's ears and make him see sense! but you've written him so endearing, it would be a shame. can't wait for more!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just finished chapter 4 *fans self*...I want Kakashi to teach me seduction! Nice lust filled chapter! I am now going to go cue up in his line for the next lesson :P

Thanks! ^__^
person LyeLye
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter, i guess all chappys cant be about smut and stuff. Im glad that you threw in a nice romantic walk in the park and then the awesome fight scene and the bonding with the mask unveiling thing. ^^ It was aweaome, i just dont know how you do it. Of course everyone reads this, people have been coming here every day to see if it has been updated, I myself squeaked with joy when i saw the chapter 12 was put up. Thank you thank you thank you! ^^ I cant wait for chapter 13 im going to check in almost every day for it. Hope you get the motivation to finish it quickly.
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi, chapter 6 was brutal for him. I kinda hope you don't have him picking up a stray woman...but then, if you write out his scenes with said woman, we would get more hot Kakashi...now I'm torn!! :P Looking forward to reading the other chapters, Thanks!! ^__^
person Doragon
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so glad you updated, this is one of my favorite stories! Its probably a good thing the lake was cold or our couple in training might have "trained" in other areas. LOL Great writing, you did such a good job with the sparring that I can't wait for a all out battle.
person lindsey
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.
Good chapter!
Cant wait for the next one!!
:)
person Lanier
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow,that was an amazing chapter. Man I agree with Kakashi .. it was a curious day. But again.. WOW!

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