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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. The story seems to have a good potential. The only problem I see is too much info about clothes - e.g. labels, brands, etc. It's boring and feels like you are trying to sell something.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, this looks really good XD. I'm a sucker for stories where Sasuke's a repressed buisnessman!! LOL, there aren't enough of them out there, and Naruto seems to a mystery waiting to unfold, so I'm excited. I hope you update soon :).
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, this was very good. The dynamic you created between Naruto and Sasuke was very interesting - they had great interaction. I can't wait to read the next part!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really looking forward to the next part of this story. I love how you've made Sasuke cold and not a bastard and I love stories where his family is living, happy and intact. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far so good. Take us to Konoha now.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
me likey, please update soon
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! ^^ Naruto should've gotten Sasuke drunk enough to do him xDD
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter!