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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness! This just story just gets better and better! Please add me the mailing list: kitty2_82@yahoo.com You have no idea how freakin' excited I am about the next chapter!
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I can't wait.
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, but I'm really worried about what's going to happen when Sasuke realizes who Naruto is. Of course I'm certain this is your intention.... cruel, very cruel.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww interesting. pls. write more.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, I do like it, but do you really need to explain and point out brand marks of every single object sasuke come in contact with? I mean, after a while it's quite annoying, after you say he's wearing very elegant and expensive clothes it's enough, you don't need to underline the fact that they're Versace's or Dior's.
other than that, I'm very curious about the rest of the story.
other than that, I'm very curious about the rest of the story.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww gee...."They laid on their respective sides and fell asleep."??? I was expecting some awkward silence or maybe a too close Naruto......that was like.....what i was waiting for......but since you said it was rushed, i guess bedtime had to be short ne? But otherly I really like this fic. It's totally cute and as always I LOVE NARUTO!! Sasuke's doing a great job being a cold bastard and not too out of character......Boy but that's tough. I can tell that you may be an outgoing person, or you really like outgoing talkative people because Naruto's totally into character & that's how i am. But when it comes to Sasuke (for me) I always make him into an emotional OOC sensitive guy. I try not to! But it's inevitable : ) I like outgoing people.....so Sasuke's got a little bita feeling (i hate that!) But you on the otherhand, are doing a fabulous job m'dear. Can't wait for more!! Please update soon! But don't rush yourself this time! : ) ♥
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better.
Update asap, ok?
Update asap, ok?
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
TOTALLY AWESOME! You need to continue! This story has great potential! ^-^
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am hooked and will be looking out for more. Your writing style is a joy to read. Flows well... I adore that.