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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Let's see where this goes.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have a really nice writing style! i like it!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this looks like a lot of fun i look forward to more chaps and more of Naruto taking advantage of Hinata
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and I thought there was going to be KibaHina. Now I feel like a sad panda!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. would like to read more. starts very calmly. then turns to something sexy. cool.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you've piqued my interest; now I'm wondering what will happen. I'll be looking forward to chapter 2!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love when authors write Naruto as a sexually agressive character. You're doing a wonderful job so far.
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Rox
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like the start. Looking forward to seeing what Naruto does with her.
Sailor Nemesis
Sailor Nemesis