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schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea with Hinata's mother teaching her how to do that jutsu. I like how Minato planned things out!
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am so sorry about those reviewers, I figured something came up like school work, or illness, so I didn't bother you, but come on people, she's doing this because she likes to write, she has NO obligation to write a chapter every day, so lay off of her. She will update when she can, instead of complaining, how about YOU guys write some stories to amuse yourselves.
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey no problem trust me I know about losing your muse when sick. I remember when I was in a car crash that left me laid on my back (90% of my body cover in bruises, looked like a patch work person) and I didn't want to do anything! So sorry to here that a lot of people are giving you flak while your sick. You get some rest and recover (good idea about the email change) and maybe some new ideas will pop-up. Get well and I'm looking for when return to us.
person roxnroll
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take your time and get well.
Rox
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well damn. That version of the Flu really sucks. I hope you feel better soon. *sends lots of chicken soup* For those impatient people, you need to learn patience, you are adults, it should have kicked in by now.
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this before. I thought I did, but I guess that's what I get for thoughtin instead of thinkin. LOL
I have really enjoyed this story so far. This last chapter had me laughing quite a bit. I have never heard of the beer song, but it was hilarious. Keep up the good work. Hope you feel better soon.
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that sucks so bad you've been so sick! there's a flu epidemic at my university right now, and i've known 5 close friends who have had it or have it right now, so i'm praying i don't catch that shit! get better, i know the flu sucks big time and takes a big toll on the body and mind, so just take it easy and concentrate on getting better :)
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EXCUSE ME! PARDON ME!! HOT SOUP!!! AAAARRRGGHHHH!!!! (CRASH!) GhostwriterMO is back with a...concussion... (THUD). Sorry I'm late getting back, been on a family emergency, and also twisted by left elbow. So lets see...hinata training, (Yikes!), mourning loved ones (sniff, sniff, I'm man enough to cry) WAH! WAH! WAH! And Hinata's birthday (the beer song? never heard of it) and over all.... I LOVED IT!!!! Thank you for something good to read after a very hard and trying ordeal I really appreciate it. Keep up the good work!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muy bueno
person roxnroll
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading it.
Rox

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