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i'm guessing each of our yonnin will have a dream/hallucination like this one, ne? very awesome, and great twists with the story!

Grrr... *growls deeply from the bottomless pit in my soul* This is the kind of turn of events that has me wanting to know what happens next. I wish I knew. I hope everyone comes out of this alright. It seems to me that this is some kind of genjutsu. Being as there are a few too many similarities to pass on. Like neji and "ten-chan" shikamaru falling asleep and whispering "ri" when the girl in charge of taking care of him is names Richu. and her eyes flash red, which if I'm not mistaken is the color of temari's eyes. and Sakura is unusually gifted with genjutsu so getting sasuke wouldn't bee too hard for her if she had a good surprise on him. I just hope that they're all ok and come out of it. And I hope "YOU" are ok Shourai-Chan.... I haven't seen any authors notes from you in the last few chapters. I sincerely hope all is well for you. You're in my prayers my friend (Hope you don't mind me calling you that) Please take care of "YOU". The story can wait but you need to take care of yourself. I for one am a devoted reader and don't want my author to be in any sort of discomfort, pain, or any other type of undesireable condition. Hope to have an update soon if for nothing else than to know that you're alright. Peace Shourai-chan.

-Spartan

Great chapter... I loved it it's going to be interesting to see what happens to Neji, Shikamaru, and Sasuke. keep up the good work

i really like this story very addicting keep it up ^^

Awww your readers love you too Shourai-Chan! You should have seen me tonight, I got online about three hours ago waiting for you to post your next chapter, and refreshed the page every ten minutes to see if you had posted. Not only that but I have to wake up in six hours to head off to work, so I should be asleep, but you have me hooked! I'm dying to read more. I've been intrigued by the "Gonin" since you first asked in your author's note about what five would be. As for the necklace, how long are you planning on torturing us for hm? You keep giving us hints, slight peeks into whats going on but you wont tell us! Knowing me I'll be staying up just as late tomorrow waiting for your next chapter. Poor Sakura, I don't blame her for being so confused and not wanting to say goodbye to Sasuke, he's such a mystery, you never know what his reaction will be. Its surprising how strong Hinata is being, but I suppose, being a mother, she has to be.

Well much love! I shall write again tomorrow. I agree with Spartan I believe it was who said she/he is always honored whenever you mention her/him in your authors notes. Its always such a joy for me too.

Now whats REALLY a joy is finding a fanfic like this with some good smut and yet a good plot as well. *sigh* So hard to come by these days. Keep up the good work Shourai!

Yet another awesomely rapturous chapter. This story never ceases to ensnare my mind. Thank you again for updating so regularly. I always find myself wondering what will happen next in this story. I can't wait to read more lol. It seems that the weather in this place seems to agree with me because while I should probably be out training like usual, it has decided to rain and freeze again just like the first time I read this story. Even the weather conspires with me to keep me reading your wonderful fic. How have you been by the way? And now this emergence of a new ninja who will possibly add another to the yonnin making them the gonnin? Kind of trippy isn't it? Being as there once was a sound ninja 5? but then 4? Now there is a leaf 4 and possibly a leaf 5? I like this fic so much because it lets me think and theorize on my own as to what will happen whilst not letting my know 100% whether or not I am right. I'm gonna head out now and probably raise some serious hell being as it's getting dark and I live way the heck out here in the forest *devious grin*. Take care of yourself Shourai-chan, Okay? I would most certainly disapprove of you falling ill again or getting hurt. I hope the sun shines brightly over you.

-Spartan

That was really good. I enjoyed the little side story here. Can't wait to read more.
Rox

great chapter.. I loved it. please keep up the good work!!!

Yet again I find myself at the edge of another cliff created by you Shourai =P I really appreciate these last few chapters you've put up. I can relate to the boys in the story because like them, I am a soldier. A U.S. Navy S.E.A.L. actually which further makes them seem like brethren because they are the Yannin. The best in their village. I thank you for the updates and I am still stunned at having actually been mentioned in your notes. I consider it an honor and a high praise coming from possibly my favorite author. Please don't kill any of the Yannin on this mission! *begs* I've seen a few too many of my own friends die in battle and leave their widows broken and crying. I am interested in this village WELL hidden in the snow. I wonder what kind of jutsu their shinobi will posess and how their skills match up to our konoha Ninja. I look forward to updates and I hope all is well for you and your family.

-Spartan

P.S. You can just call me spartan if you like.

YAYYYYYY!!!!! Sakura's pregnant!!!!! I can't wait to see what you do with their mission.... its killing me, I want to know why its such a dangerous mission -- I'm worried about all my boys (yes MY boys haha). Aww and as for Sasuke, I could see him, even though he wanted to have a baby, I could see him suddenly having second thoughts, worrying about his daughter being in danger because she's an Uchiha, and poor Hinata having to take care of Hikaru all on her own, of course the other girls will help her, but its not the same as having her Naruto-kun. How long are the boys going to be gone? I hope Hikaru doesn't grow up too much while Naruto is gone.

Here I am rambling, imagining what you have in store for everyone. I guess I just have to wait. Now I just have to say, at first I was kind of annoyed that Hinata was already able to walk around and function normally so soon after having a baby, and as for the baby I was kind of annoyed that the baby was able to survive after only being in Hinata's womb for 2 months, BUT and that is a huge but, so don't get angry at me for flaming, I realized, they both have the kyuubi going for them, he always helped Naruto heal quickly, so it makes sense that Hinata could heal quickly as well (if I'm understanding the necklace thing correctly). AND Hikaru has a bit of the kyuubi's spirit inside him as well which allows him to be stronger than most babies and the kyuubi would make sure he survived. Am I getting this right?

Anyway, this rambling is brought to you by Amaya not being able to sleep and is dying for the next chapter! thank you so much for this fic! We all love you!