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for 怪物 Body bag

by kaimono

person nyge98
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have me curious about what will happen next. Come on please keep writing and soon.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this, its a little twisted and morbid in places but totally intriguing. Please please continue. Its really fascinating so far.
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oy, how very curious.
But I do hope that Naruto isn't dissected. o_O
person Sick for God
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, I'd love to see another chapter soon. Must feed my desires =}
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Naruto is in for some surprise surgery. I hope Gaara has kept his operating basement in clean sterile conditions. Wouldn't want his patient to get an infection, now, would we?
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well.. xD When I finally went ' D'OH! This is AU! ' I think I settled into the story a little more, but something about Naruto put me off in this one. I know he's a loud mouth and pretty rash, but I don't think he'd be the type to sit there cursing out loud when he was in a dark room alone. It seems like what he said out loud seems like it would have been better suited as thoughts, and the way he kept getting panicked.. O: I think it would have been more Naruto-like if he didn't get panicked so easy. Isn't he the type to just try to power through things, after all?

All together, though, I like the style of writing and the details you put into things. :D It felt like I could really see the room with all of the medical stuff in it.
person Los Munequitos
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, can't wait to read more.
person The Good Satanist
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I am looking forward to more.
person Murderer
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting stories I've come across in a LONG time. Please update, for a fellow Dir en Grey fan.
person billy
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you evil! I swear I'm gonna have nightmares of this shit tonight.......but I couldn't stop reading. Good story

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