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for Immolation

by UbakeNeko

schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! You have to continue this.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good fr a start. Keep it coming.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although brief, this is a very good story. =^^=

Honestly, I don't think you need to continue it. "Immolation" is like a snapshot. Its a captured moment and when Sakura utters "my place," it is a promise of things to come, left up to the reader's imagination. Not that I'm discouraging you from writing more (lord knows I enjoyed it), but honestly, the fic stands alone well enough by itself.


Excellent job! Keep up the good work!
person A Reviewer
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Much too short.
person s8young
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How should i put this???? KEEP GOING!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!

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