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for Sensei and Me

by trucrystal

person Tegan
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please..Please tell me your continuing this!?
I've always liked this sort of adult/student relations...And..This story is exactly the way I love it!
Innocent child, totally unaware of whats happening, unconsiously advancing on the older male,and him, knowing it's wrong but not being able to control himself..And..Kakashi and sakura! :D
Seriously, I will cherish this story forever <3 I'll be waiting and hoping for more!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was actually horrified by the premise of this, but after reading the reviews I decided to give it a chance and its actually a very well done story. I thought it was just going to be some nasty creepy Kakashi/young Sakura smut, but you've actually written a very good story that lacks any sort of creepy factor (aside from that horrible scene in the bar. Terrifying! I was so upset reading it -- a sign that you're doing a very convincing job with your story! ^^)

Also, Naruto and Sasuke wrestling and asking for privacy was a nice incentive to get Sakura out of the room. Hehhehe.

Keep up the good work. I'm going to look forward to the next chapter. :D
person Tige321
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O Omg,this is my most favorite story ever,you do an excellent job describing things,you're dead on. If you ever stop writing this,I'll smash you. O_O *points threateningly*
person Lunar84
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I have to admit, just like the previous reveiwer, I was hesistant on reading about a 13 year old Sakura and Kakashi. But, I read the reviews first and they were all positive so I thought I'd give it a try. I'm glad I did. This story is amazing. It was tastefully written and very entertaining.

You definately have talent. I would love for you to not only update this fic, but continue written more Naruto fanfics in the future. You certainly have a gift. Not one that many people have. You have a way of sucking the reader into the story in the first few lines. I would LoVe lOvE LoVe to see you write a longer fic. One with at least 40 chapters ^_^ It wouldn't matter who the couple would be ( as long as one half is Sakura) or what the plot would be. I would sit and read for hours because that's the talent you have.

Anyway please update when time permits I really look forward to the conclusion to this fic!
person bluemoon_175
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read and see what happens next so I hope you try and update as soon as you can.
person toodles
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that's pretty hot, tho, uh, are u going to have them go any farther? That would be great.
person bluemoon_175
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and can't wait to read more so I hope you try and update asap please.
person moodymel
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know it's probably wrong, but I really like this story. Kakashi isn't just being a pervert, he's actually trying to help Sakura in a way. I think it just takes the Teacher/Student dynamic to another level. Please update soon!

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