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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Rox
Rox
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope there was no rape involved in Hanabi's beating. I'm not sure if I would be able to handle that. This was some nice work though. Update soon!
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you made a mistake in your story in the first chapther jiraya is alive and not writing stories and in the second
he is dead. not a crititsism just pointing it out to be fixed or better explained.
he is dead. not a crititsism just pointing it out to be fixed or better explained.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that is worth the wait and very great twist on what happend. Well done
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*re wirte * ok i read it a second time and nearly feel out of my chair both times its a well rounded story funny/serious both time 1 of the best nar/han/hana fanfic u *u should have let naruto put another ple up his ass*good luck and keep it comming bored out of mind with this w8ing and i'm going 2 try and read your other story
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can't wait for chapter 2.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story hope to see all three in action soon. cant wait
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. I 'm waiting for more here. And I must agree. When Hanabi get's to marry that bastartd I will have to come after you with the biggest sword I can find ^-
But I have the feeling that won't happen. I eager to read more, especially Hinatas Plan.
And it seems Tsunade can't stand Hiashi either.
I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.
But I have the feeling that won't happen. I eager to read more, especially Hinatas Plan.
And it seems Tsunade can't stand Hiashi either.
I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome me love
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting to see the next chapter of this story for a long time. I can wait a little while longer. Can't wait to see it!