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Wow, I really love this story. Thanks for not making it cliche and boring. Really loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

nyaaaaaaahhh! I love your story! It's always fun to read about a very disgruntled!sasuke. I really hope you update soon! I'll have to bookmark it so i don't forget. I wish aff.net had a alert system like ff.net!

please update soon!! cant wait!! ;D

Gah! I kept missing these updates..I'm so glad I found u again!! XD Chapter was great..Sasuke's angst hehe...he's a better uke then Naruto in my opinion....but that could just be me hehe..Can't wait for more!!!

I love your story! I can't wait to read more of it!!

Really good fic...But i don´t know how this will finish,knowing Sasuke and his pride...and seeing how Naruto is behaving(with Kyubi,of course =P)

wow.. *huggles*.. I'm flattered you think so highly of me... but more importantly, onto my thoughts about your newest chapter!!!

Great job, I actually feel bad for Sasuke.. I mean, sure he's a cold bastard, but to have to deal with massive hickey's like that... while funny as hell... still feel for him.. lol

Now the Hokage added in a little more quality time for the two.. that's a good handful of salt for that wound.. XD

I honestly can't wait to find out what happens next, I mean, Sasuke is going to say or do something to retaliate, right??.. hmm.. and how long can Naruto be around him without losing control???

Please update soon, hun!!

hey, just found this. definitely intersted. cant wait for hte smut *wink*

Chapter 7: Nice opening. I like the way you described Sasuke’s focus on the marks. That happens in real life; someone obsesses or focuses on something for a long time and it becomes more than what it is. . . . Whoa! There goes the mirror! O_O . . . . XD “Great, now his knuckles hurt too.” So typical. XD . . . . Sasuke’s apparently in one of those moods where every little thing pisses him off. . . . “The thought made him even more irritated.” Yeah, I would think so! All these guys marking him like he belongs to them! ^^ . . . . Hmm, that’s a good point: “He didn’t know whether he should be relieved [. . .] mercy on him.” Really good line. . . . Man, you do an excellent job with the pauses! “He had been – he stilled – helpless.” Beautiful. =) . . . . Um, a little confusion on the paragraph beginning with “However, Sasuke was still bitterly aware [. . .]” You start it off about Itachi, then the next line is back to Naruto. During the sentence, “He found himself remembering [. . .]” I thought you were talking about Itachi for a second. . . . Really good description of Sasuke’s anger waxing and waning throughout this whole scene. I love it. ^_^ . . . . Why’s the neck too tight, though? Too many bandages? ô_o
“His bandages itched.” Clever line. . . . Ahahaha! About Tsunade: “Bitch.” About Naruto for telling him that: “Son of a bitch.” XDDDDD . . . . Um, “Even [in] his head.” Left out the “in.” ^_^; . . . . Nice dialogue. . . . Boy, I’m intrigued. I’m just as intrigued AND as suspicious as Sasuke. I can feel his emotions perfectly. . . . Ha, knew Naruto was going.

No problem about the angst! I normally don’t like it, but “angst” didn’t come to mind when I was reading that. It wasn’t overdepressing or anything like that; they were perfectly understandable emotions. ^_^ I like this chapter a lot. The cliffhanger was mild, but that’s okay. I can’t wait to see how Sasuke’s going to react to Naruto going with him, and I wonder who the rest of his team is. I also wonder how this mission is going to go and how this is part of Tsunade’s “plan.” I sympathize with you for your tests, but please don’t leave us hanging too long! >.<

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another update... sooner this time! yay! i liked it. cant wait to see how this turns out.