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for For The Child

by WhisperElmwood

schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story, it was painful to read but you write well... Ibiki's quiet acceptance and the memory of Ibiki being Neiji's strength at a horrible time was perfect, beautiful.
person Twiggies
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!
I hope that man is arrested for his whole life! xD
Thank God he can't have their child.

Wonderful sequel!
Poor Neji, again. Pregnansy kind of saved Hinata for a while. xD
And telling Ibiki about Hiashi was a wise move.
I wonder what Neji is going to do now.
Things like that must be hard to put behind and he can't wonder for the rest of his life. xD

I hope you will write more!
person llyoung
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the sequel and for getting Neji, Hinata and Hanabi away from Hiashi.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you. Now that bastard needs to die a slow painful death. I would like to read about the trial, Hinata and naruto getting Married, what happens with Hanabi, and all of that good stuff. This is a great story. I hope you write another one. Thanks
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah!! Fin is such an awful word!! Your writing just makes me want more. I seriously don't think this should end, its just so damn good, but if you must end it here, its still bloody brilliant. Thank you so much for writing it.

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