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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well a suggestion on the summon would be a humanoid Kitsune or such
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting revision of the universe, got started reading and had to finish to see how it was gonna go and gotta say i likes it much, whens the next chapter due?
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok i like this chapter a lot and the future potential it shows.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i just wish life would allow you to update more often
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I just popped by to say I really enjoyed your story. It wasn't the sort of thing I normally read (yaoi fangirl), but I really liked it. Most people, when writing a harem fic, don't bother ro build character depth or an actual story line at all.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Starfig
I just popped by to say I really enjoyed your story. It wasn't the sort of thing I normally read (yaoi fangirl), but I really liked it. Most people, when writing a harem fic, don't bother ro build character depth or an actual story line at all.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Starfig
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice...just one thing though Shion is a beauty though...
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think Hinata should get some kind of raptor (Bird of prey). They have excellent eye-sight and that would work well with her scouting. Perhaps an owl, they're known to fly silently and with the killer night-vision, they'd make a good combo for shinobi who need to scout an area. Maybe I'm over-thinking. Keep up the good work.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Cupcakes for you!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story. like the mix of fun serious and action. i would suggest a mink and a lynx. both small and cute and have, proper or improper, depending on your views sexual connotations. also i would offer my services as a proofreader. i admit to being somewhat of a space case thought it might not get done in a timely manner if time is a factor.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I really hope you continue with this story. It's holds great promise. I wish to see it to the end. Great job andI'll be waiting for the other chapters.
HentaiKing (KS)
HentaiKing (KS)