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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
seems a bit rushed, but definitely interesting. just try to work on everything flowing a little more smoothly from one move to the next I think.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Shotam/Hinata lemon was a little odd since they're 12 or 13, but then I'm one to talk. But the Kaka/Saku had me going o_O WTF. Despite that, both chapters were very well written.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot. How old is she in here? Can't wait to read more.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. Can't wait to read more.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, why so short? So far it's good. It'll be interesting to see how this pans out.