schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start can't wait for me. So sorry about Minato every time i think of him dying i cry. :D
schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this seems very interesting indeed. I look forward to more updates very soon. Keep up the good work and thank you for the good spelling and grammar!
schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow
kakashi a daddy...with out Iruka
oh poor naruto-_-
lol
this is going to be good
please continue soon^-^
kakashi a daddy...with out Iruka
oh poor naruto-_-
lol
this is going to be good
please continue soon^-^
schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loooove this story! i'm curious why you had kakashi be the adopted dad rather than iruka? but that aside, you did a good job with characterization and making this seem so real. please update soon!
schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* SO Orochimaru sicced Kyubi on Leaf! That explains a lot! And Naruto will grow up with Kakashi as his dad? Will he be playing match-maker? If I was him, I would ask Kakashi and Iruka's friends to help out...The ones that he does trust! The Anbu seems willing to care for Naruto, at least he will be getting good medical care...Where will he eat? I cannot see any smart civilian boycotting Kakashi! The Anbu might take offense to that...
schedule
November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am intigued and praise your high standards of writing gonna go checmk out your other works now so cya and looking forward to the next chappie! could you email me when you publish it or i fear i will lose track of the story as i dont regularly check this site! xx