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Awesome way in introducing Iruka as a parental figure alonside Kakashi as well as a solution to the whole 'taking care of the baby' ordeal. Keep the chapters rolling!

oh i love it
a little sadden that its not sasuke and naruto but i still like it
please update soon

I like how you making this story out to be...that part when Yondiame(sp?) was dying i nearly brought me to tear, that part was especially well written.

The main reason why i started to read this story was because i saw "neji/naru"; that's a rare pairing not too many people write about...sofar your story is really interesting, i'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I like where this is going even more. you put Iruka right in the house! Yeah! now kakashi won't have to try so hard. LOL. Anyway can't wait to see how naruto acts with the other children now that he has parents or guardians or what ever he calls them. Since that was a big part of his youth in the anime and the bond that connected him with Sasuke after Itachi went all crazy and killed everyone. Oh one question, is itachi still going to be all like Yeah cool brother one minute then HAHAHAHAHA your weak Sasuke so i killed everyone but you another minute in this fanfic.

Wow that review is long. Anyway. LOVe this story can't wait for more.

Lokivsanubis

Awww...Iruka has now officially entered this mess. I feel sorry for anyone trying to dis Naruto now, for they shall be struck with unholy wrath! Anyhoo! Another awesome and well written chapter. You are quite the story teller. Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

I can imagine Iruka and Naruto setting up pranks together for when Kakashi is late. It's so nice to find a story where everyone who seemed to be denied of love and care finds someone they can be happy with.

oh this is sooo neat! thanx 4 sharing this story ... and i can't wait to see where you go with it. what naru pairing will there be, if any?

This story is really good and I am looking forward to future installments. I appreaciate how fast you updated and want to thank you for that.

Very sad and very well written. Good Job, please do continue with this story. ^_^

This is an awesome first chapter! I can't wait to see more of it. One more thing on the list to look forward to.