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by LadyLaran

person animelover
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was absolutely breathtaking! i wish i had an imagination like that .. to be able to come up with a ritual and describe with such fine details. you're a genius. can't wait for the update to see kakashi's history. Oh, is there going to be a time skip at some point?
person tash1021
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^.^ doggies
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Another awesome chapter. I can't tell you how much I'm truly enjoying this story. Can't wait for more.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've updated again? I am soooooooooo loving you for that. Just when I was resigned to wait a week, *BAM* New chapter. Almost feels like Christmas. Great Job.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool can't wait for more!
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schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The mask concept for the Hatake clan is a clever idea. I'm interested to see where you go with it. (On a side note, if it is customary for Hatake clan members to cover their faces, this could benefit Naruto in the sense that his Kyuubi markings on his cheeks would be obstructed from view. Will it help people to forget? Not sure, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter!)

Keep up the good work! ^^
person lokivsanubis
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like how you have restored honor to Kakashi's family since it was lost in the manga i believe after his father's screw up then suicide. But that's not important because i love the way you work this story. Iruka got freaked out by his uniform but the design was ingenious. Baby Naruto is so lucky to have powerful parents.
OH yeah!! i read somewhere about this really strong Hatake attack that involves white chakra, its called the Hatake Family Tanto and i guess it can be considered a blood limit since it involves white chakra only the Hatake family controls.... and its a type of chakra blade that was made famous through Kakashi's father's use of it. oh and kakashi's father was known as Konoha's White Fang. :P

Hope the information was helpful in your story because i can't wait for it to continue. i really want to know about this ceremony of the Hatake family.

Lokivsanubis
person lokivsanubis
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!! It's so sweet and i don't know if you had it from the beginning but i have never read and liked a Neji/Naru before so i'm curious to see how this turns out. I have high hopes for this excellent story. keep it up!

Loving this story,

Lokivsanubis
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting and updating so quickly! I'm really enjoying this story - the plot is so fascinating that I don't even miss the smut lol. Seriously though, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story as you show a new take on Naruto's childhood and his relationships with his father figures. Great work.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I very much am enjoying this story. The power struggle was interesting and I am looking forward to the ritual. I hope you will develop a backstory for the Hatake clan. Thanks for the story.

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