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Meh I know this completely out of the blue but I always wanted to co-author a story with somebody and you seem a nice enough person and you help point out some things that I haven't even noticed in my story Dream Girls which I'll quickly use to my advantage but anyway, why not?

I'll definetly read the rest of the story later but so far it is excellent and believable and I'v been searching for somebody to write a Naruto fic with and I was wondering if you are possibly interested. If you are then simply e-mail at simplywandering@yahoo.com

Gah hope you accept. I'll be waiting.

Very enjoyable :D

I love the background you give, you are keeping in character while fully establishing the possible future changes. I especially like your reasoning behind Kakashi's clan power.

Looking forward to your next update.

Great story so far! i can;t wait to read more!

omg omg omg!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!!! you are such a great writing i could feel the setting of the story!!! This is so great! (can you feel my enthusiasm?)

Oh no now Iruka is going into Mother Hen Mode Kakashi better watch out. LOL I can't wait to see what else you bring foreward after an experience like that.

:P can't wait for more.

Lokivsanubis

This is story is really, really awesome. I loved the power play Kakashi pulled at the Council meeting, as well as the fact that he's Naruto's new dad.

The idea of the pack adoption was great and beautifully described.

Hope to read more soon.

this fic is fricking awesome. 'nuff said. looking foward to the next update.

Great story, cannot wait til next chapter

Very good. And unexpected. I love the wolf ritual this is soooo cool.

wow. very cool story
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I really like Iruka, and his ability to contain himself until the end of that remarkable ritual was amazing. Great ritual, and I look forward to the explanation in the next chapter.