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for May It Be

by LadyLaran

person Ryu Earth
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story! =D
so good, though i am curious, does Kakashi still wear his mask around the house/Iruka or does he remove it?
person lex
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good fic , i love it!!! i wonder will this be yaoi?
person Mette
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story, unique, I dare to say. But I'd like to see something new now. How about the relationships? New friends or foes? Of course, all the explaining first. Yeah, I'm impatient. Keep it up though!
person anna
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I think that this fic lost its focus, I liked it a lot when it dealt with Kakashi's and Iruka's approach to parenthood, now it's lost to some extent. I know that they are both young to consider a relationship now but ths chapter makes me think of Mary sues and ooc. There's nothing much between them, not even friendship, it's kind of bland.
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally managed to finish reading the chapters you written so far including the other one and I have to admit if I was Iruka I would have freaked out beyond belief but I'm glad it was done. It was necessary and I love the story so far. I am wondering though when his Icha Icha Paradise tendencies will creep in. Meh can't wait until your next update and talk to you later. ^^
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how I was fiending for an update for this story and you didn't disappoint. I can't wait for the next update.
person biiisti
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. I can't wait the next update to come ^^

person animelover
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a cool explanation about the Hatake clan! i don't follow the manga so wasn't aware of Kakashi's father having committed suicide; but aren't Kakashi's summons more dog than wolf? at least they look that way on the anime.

anyway, awesome job and wonderful details. see you next time! oh, do you know how many chappies this will be?
person Blaque
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i luv it, so unique. the way you broke down kakashi's family history was the shit. i'll b lookin for your update.
person qwerty
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I like the background story.
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