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by LadyLaran

schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY interesting! I'm totally hooked and can't wait for the next chapter! I really like that Kakashi and Iruka haven't jumped each other's bones yet, but are bonding and becomming family first; I like it when authors develop the story slowly like that, take your time with the lemon, the longer you draw it out, the sweeter it will be :). I always adore the stretch of time before the lemon, the time when they feel things but don't necesarily act, but notice and have awkward, adorable moments. I'm curious as to how the household will function if Itachi and Sasuke ends up living there. Especially Itachi. Will he be given the blame of the Uchiha's demise, will the truth be told or?? I'll be here, reviewing everything when ever I can, trust me! :D
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this'll make things different.
person POHness1
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow. that is an interesting plot turn. so, then i guess, if the boys agreed to go through it, the Uchiha blood would be overwritten. *snickers* well, the Hatake Clan seems to be flourishing. anyway, i am liking where this story is heading. please continue. ^_^
person smint45
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so OOC but I really like it!!!! Finally we have something different to the usual!!!! I'm really I found this story!!!! I can't wait for Itachi to decide!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
person animelover
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure if i've ever review this or not, but wow what a totally cool story! i think i remember reading it early on but just lost track of it ... life happens, as i'm sure you know.

beautiful story ..
person hiju
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ogawd im glad your back i missed you lots
person ZeroZoey
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am soooooooooooop happy you are back, I love this story. One of my favorite. So I was excited to see a new update. I love the small changes made to Naruto, blond hair with a little bit of silver and a little bit lighter skin color. It will also be cool to see what else will be change and how much smarter he will be. I hope you update soon it is awesome you are back and I loved the story
person POHness1
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hiya! ^_^ i am really enjoying this story. i cant wait to see how Naruto acts when he grows up even more. I love the world you have created. as an avid Naruto fanfiction reader, I can say that, for someone with supposed minimal knowledge in the series, you are doing spectacularly. ^_^ plz continue. I cant wait to read on.
person Keisha
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! The characherization alone has me hooked. Your characters have a brain and actually use them. I'm curious to find out what you mean when you say the Uchiha Clan is "gone". i always had a hard time accepting the fact that one kid could kill a large group of ninja like himself. It'll be interesting to see how it plays out. Again, thanks for the great read so far!
person Rishart5
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
May It Be Is By Far THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And iv Read alot of fanfics like over ... 100 lol PLEASE HURRRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im dyeing to know what happens Next!!!! so is everyone else whos read this to im sure lol PS: that was very creative on how u did the whole DNA thing to make naruto a Hatake very neat Cant wait for next chapter!!!

Rishart5

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