rate_review Reviews

I thought the story was good and hot. It was wicked fun. :D You could do a couple more drabbles in this universe, that I think, would be total fun. Owari. :D

"No one's gonna come...except maybe Junko...I think he was approaching orgasm just as you confiscated it..." ...it took me the longest time to realize who he was talking about :D I was thinking something like "how the hell can he know that someone was having sex- ...ooooh! I get it!" and then I lol'd. seriously, woke up my roommate.

ANYWAY, loved it! and they did stay in character. haven't read the second chapter yet, but I'm getting to it!!

and I just loooove flustered-but-determined!Iruka. now, to that second chapter...

...never mind :D

and haven't people read fanfics? of course jiraya writes also yaoi, he must please the readers!

still loved the first chapter and had to cool down after it. and I wanted to give you a nice review because you always write the nicest ones for me :)

You really deserve more reviews for this, I personally thought it was hot and so fluffy, aww!

Such a cool title!!

Wow, you should write more of this, a lot more.

Yes, that would be good.

Now I have a nosebleed to take care of...

*blinks into confusion* Since when did Jiraiya write yaoi porn? Just who is he using as inspiration? Because if it turns out he is spying on Naruto, Tsunade might have to make peeping a capital crime...Because I doubt Naruto would be thrilled if his sex life was made public...