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fascinating I never would have thought Hinata had it in her and Naruto. poor dude. by the way is there suppose to be a second chapter? chapter two you wrote "Finally updated it." but there wasn't a chapter only the disclaimer. Would love to read chapter two if you have one.

updated with whhat? there's nothing there

Hmmmm.... So Naruto gets played for a fool. Now since he doesn't want to be played like that he goes and says no to everyone... But Hinata is going to surprise him but how... I have a few ideas how but I will see what u write and I believe I know what she is going to do because she spilled her heart out to him.. Now she wants to show him that she cares. I wish I had a girl like that but I won't find her...

i really liked this!
i think giving naruto the same issues/self doubts that most teenagers have makes him... more connectable? like more relatable- something you can sympathize with.
i feel for the guy, haha. being teased and picked on when you're at your most vulnerable is terrible- and i'm interested in how this will turn out. especially how hinata will react/tie in with the plot.
great job so far- i can't wait to read the rest!