schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool first chapter. It needs a little editing but, I'm one to talk. Anyway great start.
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schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, good start. I'd like you to keep going with this.
(May wanna fix the formatting, though. All the apostrophes are replaced with capital O's with squiggles. ^^')
I'm with you on the bit about Shino. Yikes.
(May wanna fix the formatting, though. All the apostrophes are replaced with capital O's with squiggles. ^^')
I'm with you on the bit about Shino. Yikes.
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Very unique.
Makes me wonder who's gonna end up with who? ;)
And BTW Gaara rocks my socks!! <3
Makes me wonder who's gonna end up with who? ;)
And BTW Gaara rocks my socks!! <3