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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! why did you abandon this!!! i want more.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story!!!!! So far. Please write more. Later.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo! You made a second chapter! =^.^= I really love this, keep up the good work!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well. i dont really know what to say. naruto seems pretty ooc to me, a little too vulnerable and hurt. and what the hell is sasuke thinking? anyway, its your story, and it is fiction i suppose so i'll move on. Naughty sas for doing to naruto what those bad boys did at the orphanage. tsk tsk, though... come on naruto, i dont wanna say u were asking for it but all that sleeping in the yout's bed prob WASNT a good idea!
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are going to finish this story because I think you have a great start.
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you mark every warning in sight? Mpreg and tort?
And by the way, you wont consider making this a NaruSasUke in
stead? Pretty please with a cherry on top?!?
And by the way, you wont consider making this a NaruSasUke in
stead? Pretty please with a cherry on top?!?
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
PLEASE make this a NaruSasUke STORY and have Sasuke the one that gets pregnant.
PLEASE make this a NaruSasUke STORY and have Sasuke the one that gets pregnant.
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have ti say that's a pretty good start to this story. i can actually see sasuke playing the violin and naruto shaking his fine lil ass. hee hee!!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really been liking this so far! Keep up the good work, and i hope theres a second chapter to come! But don't rush yourself too much! :)
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. I'm be watching out for updates. Funny about Sasuke not liking the top... bunk.