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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely and emotional. good work!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I knew I was missing part of my life when I became to busy to read! I missed you! Omg This story actually made me want to cry! Seriously! That was so freaking adorable!Oh SQUEE!!!!!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The part where Naruto caught Sasuke from colapsed is so sweet.
It's like he can read Sasuke mind, need and movement.
How I wish I can walk into the Dobe in the shower and shaking his butt. *nosebleed*
It's like he can read Sasuke mind, need and movement.
How I wish I can walk into the Dobe in the shower and shaking his butt. *nosebleed*
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no it wasn't crappy in it's quickness it was cute. at first i thought it was going to have sasuke have a last screw before he died so making him just pressed to be with naruto for his birthday was a beautiful ending.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools* I'm sooo glad I cracked the whip on you...If you keep making smut like that I'll have to crack the whip more often!!! XD
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sweet...i love it. You never disappoint with any of your stories, even the ones you write quickly turn out wonderful.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD! This was cute, I loved it!! The sex was yummie~~
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was so sweet. Sniffle. I thought it was great that you made it a birthday fic. So, where's that picture that inspired the story?
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute as hell! XD good work!!
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice and very well done - the last 5 stories i have read (tried to read) were either lame, boring or poorly done. this one was very well put together and had a nice flow to it. liked the ending best!
may i make ask if you have ever read my story 'happy birthday'? i think you might like it - though it is 6 chapters long it is complete.
keep up the good writing!
may i make ask if you have ever read my story 'happy birthday'? i think you might like it - though it is 6 chapters long it is complete.
keep up the good writing!