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for Going Down

by Zrina

person Clueless
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! me like sooo erm.....daniel defoeish and sooo hmm... slightly lostish and a whole lot of action i need to read it twice. hit me with more please!! :D
person blueh
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so interesting!! i'd love to know what happens next!! *glomps*
person Ordained
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another triumph! xD I loved it, as I love the rest of your stuff, of course.

Ah, when Sasuke lost his shoe. Hehe. Classic. Keep going. ;D I look forward to the rest.
person kataru
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. cuute! XD
person Allys
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Between pathetically, adorable kicked puppies and sputtering old church ladies outside of porn shops, it's getting kinda of hard to breathe through the laughter, *snickers*, 'Please give him a fat head up his ass!' LOL. *Glomps Zrina* pass it on to Adi, this is a fantastic idea XD. You both rock, and I love it already. I think you did the crash, really really well, LOL, although I have no experience to vouch for its authenticity *knocks on wood*. It was pretty excellent and I love how you set up the dynamic already XD. 'Of course Sasuke doesn't harass or harangue his others pilots, Love, he's not interested in any of them' *MUAH, rubs Naruto's back* LOL! Tell the blond beauty not to worry about it. And *snickers* LOL, all I could think of when he was reciting his list of faults was what others things he could do rough XD. *blink blink* 'Who threw my brain in that gutter??' LOL, is it too late to profess my innocence? XD, probably *snickers*. I'm excited about updates!! LOL, but I don't suppose you have a schedule for this one *Hugs u*. Here's to awesome ideas *Kanpai* ♥♥♥
person Bluesake
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. xD Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! Continue soon?
person Adi
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAH!

I love this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, *has a heart attack all over you*
ok
favourite bits, included all the smartass!Naruto comments, they were so damn funny and so cute
and I loved Sasuke in this!
hes such an unbelievable ass
god the way this fic started! with a plane crash! talk about jumping right in!!!
*loves you to pieces*
and they way you described them, I could see them in my head, I always love how the Naruto you write appears in my mind, he’s so drool worthy and Sasuke in his business suit thinking about how to fire Naruto GAH!!! I love this!! *smexes you senseless* thank you so much for writing this, I can’t believe you’ve had it for so long

and I’m so happy you’re writing more *loves loves loves* I think I truly do love it the most when you write humor, because it always has me in hysterics but its sexy at the same time. the intimate hold part? *swoons* you’re all about the fanservice *beams at you*

Seriously, all the smart ass comments from Naruto just made me laugh so much, I adored this to pieces and its mainly me just fangirling over you :D

sorry babe, I would write more but I need sleep *just got home* THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME!

*kisses*
person lo
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. There is already wonderful tension building. Nicely written and fun, great job!
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really cool begingin so far. Having naruto as the piolit is cute, and of course who doesn't like a prick-uke-ass like Sasuke? Hahaa! I can't wait for them ot make 'a move' lol, keep up the good work!

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