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for Silver Lining

by cynchick

schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
3 words: YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!

--Radgar
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just love how you concentrate more on the relationship than the mission, because that's the most important thing. I also am in awe of the way you put the emphasis on the important things, but don't center the story completely on them. I hope to read the next chapter soon!
person zeroharm
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh I know you like to go angst on us but this had better not end any way other that happily. I just don't think my poor waff loving heart could take it :-( on a chapter related note, great action as always, but you are a bit of a bastard for leaving us hanging on what exactly was on the scroll :-) on the bright side though, you tend to update crazy fast considering the quality you output so it isn't as big of a deal. Looking forward to the next one.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Egad. I love this story so much! And I also loved Perception, although I never reviewed it. I can't wait till the next chapter comes out and I must say that I envy your talent with developing characters and making them as real as you do.
person Fino
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man I cried so hard!! there was so much raw pent up emotion in it, it was great. This is probably my favorite chapter so far, just becasue I love it when I can feel so much in the stories, and man I felt it. My heart still hurts a bit from it.
It was rather great as well because my sister was listening to Lifehouse's Everything, and when I got to the part in the story where the Sexual tension broke the last part of the song started up. I don't know if you've heard it or not, but it's a really hard and moving ending for a song. It just added to the whole affect and feel of a dam breaking.
It was great and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!!!
person zeroharm
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah... the bitter yes succulent taste of angsty-waff :-) Excellent chapter as always, and doing the impossible by more than living up to "Perception". Was almost expecting sakura to lost control and blow a hole in the wall into the next room. Might have raised some suspicions, but it would have been priceless.
person Andrew J. Prior
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great angry sex. i will have to try to get a girl angry at me and then try that if she is not on the verge of killing me. i really liked the other story perception. very good. this is a good sequal. was very sad when you explained what happened to every one in the beginning of the story
person vic
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! So heartbreak and yet very sexy and tender!
person oohshiny
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god. THANK YOU for making a sequel. if you didnt, idve killed you, as everyone who read your last one wanted dei-chan to get another chance, cuz last time itachi was in the way. ok, i can tell by your a/ns you udate 1nce a week, but can you email me which day, i don't want to get anxious and check every day and get dissapointed cuz it isnt there. my email is deannathx@comcast.net MKAY ~^^~
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM

You are horrible just kidding! all week long I been waiting for this story and that chapater so made it worth the wait. Love it and can't wait for more!

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