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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person gaara89
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You updated!! and what a great chapter it was!! please! update soon!!! please i'm begging you!!
person shai69
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't told you yet but I love this story; absolutely completely and totaly love it. I'm glad Sasuke has finally dislodged his head from his ass and is finally going to let Naruto love him :-)
person HumanInfitltrator
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaah. And now?

I've always been partial to Gaara/Neji.

Thank you!
person MeLaiya
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE THIS!!!! Please Im begging you to please update and keep up the good work, I am sooooo loving this right now
person lo
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a very intense chapter! Nicely done.
person gaara89
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah!! Oh my god it was so good I had to read it again AND review again!! Please...PLEASE...continue soon! It's getting really good, and yes you are keeping them in character quite well! :)
person LadyApollonia
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What!!! What is the brilliant idea?!?!? I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update extremely soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person tofupimp
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could squeal and exclaim over this fanfiction for the rest of eternity...I can't believe you left us hanging so! EVIL!!
I love the emotions that you explore--the setup between the four characters are ingenious; Naruto and Sasuke seem so in character to me that I can see them in my head acting out what you've written! This is probably my favorite NaruxSasu ficlet yet, which is something considering I've been following the fandom since 6 years ago! <3 I can't wait to read more!!
person Kang
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, cliffhanger!! ::rolls around on the floor:: please update as soon as you can, I love the fic!
person despairs
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better each time i read it. Chapter 7 had me in tears at the end....which is a compliment to you, it means you have written it well (as usual) I don't know why Sasuke has to hurt Naruto so much and so bad but i hope he makes up for it in the long run. *hugs poor Naruto* Hang in there kiddo.

Also i noticed Neji and Gaara are feeling more comfortable holding hands :D I think thats awesome. They are so cute together.

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