rate_review Reviews

I'm not normally a big Sasu/Saku fan, but I decided to give this 'fic a try. All in all, I think you did a good job with this. Sakura has a lot of great potential for angst, and you definitely make the most of it here. In plotting terms, I was especially fond of the scene where Sakura sneaks through Sasuke's home and sees the picture of Team Seven, with only her face exposed. On the critical side, I felt like the dialogue at the end between Sakura and Sasuke was, at times, a little bit stilted - mostly on Sasuke's part. To me, he came off as more of a cold-intellectual than a cold-hiding-his-feelings. For the most part, the skill with which you described the physical details of communication, though - touches, etc - more than made up for it. I'm sure in Adult+ and Adult++ stories, that skill would be hugely more important. (^_^) Taken together, I enjoyed this story a lot. Thank you for writing.

This is the first time I have ever read a songfic and not gotten annoyed at the song bits. Good Job.

I loved this. It was beautiful.


I always felt like Sausuke cared for Sakura, but didn't want her to care for him... for her own good. But thats just my take. But again this was beautiful and a pleasure to read. Thank you

Oh, that was beautiful! Absolutely beautiful. I love angsty SasuSaku stories almost as much as I love the happy ones: you write wonderfully and I could feel Sakura's emotions through the screen. Awesome job.

That was really good. I would love to see you continue this.
Rox

tragic and beautiful, all at once.