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for You Cannot See Love

by omgitsgwen

person Dragon7
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
10-02-07

If you are still in the need of a Beta I would love to be one for you; but the down side is that I do have work and school so I can not promise to get it to you the same day you send it. I'll try thou to get it back to you as soon as I can.

~The Black Sand of Gara

P.S. My e-mail is Black DragonRose5@aol.com
P.P.S. Don't you have to be at least over 18 to work in a tatoo parlor, so are they in high school or college? And doesn't Naruto need parent consent to get his lip piercing if he is under 18?
P.P.P.S. I love the ground plot of this story so far, Naruto with a lip ring. I can't wait to see what Sasuke has. ^vv^
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm............ i like it :)
person Word_Slave
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is great! I'll beta for you if you want.
Slave
person Catsura
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good, I love it, no offence and I probably have no room to talk but possibly longer chapters?
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
k k i'll give feedback :P, i luv the idea, sounds like it has alot of potential, and i really want to see what happens with it :P please continue soon
person Word_Slave
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this will be great! Keep on.
Slave
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Naruto with a lip ring! Very very smexy! I like this story so far! Keep them coming!!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I love it!

So cute how Sasuke wasn't all "Little baby D<" but instead as all caring and such ^_^ Great job! I can't wait for more!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like what i have seen so far. with the way you started your story off it has a lot of potential for anything to happen. when sasuke joins naruto's school will he be having any rivals for naruto. is sakura, hinata, and ino going to be a help or a hindrance. i hope you continue with this story and can't wait til the next update.

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